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martes, 28 de octubre de 2008
MY BIRTHDAY IN CALIFORNIA
I ENJOYED MY BIRTHDAY IN CALIFORNAI, BECAUSE IT WAS THE MOST WONDERFUL AND LONGER BIRTHDAY I`VE EVER HAD. IN THE FIRST WEEK WE STARTED THE CELEBRATION IN THE HOUSE OF MY UNCLE, AND I ENJOYED A LOT TO BE WITH MY FAMILY, BECAUSE I SPENT ALL OF MY TIME WITH MY FAVORITE COUSIN MAIRA WHO IS VERY NICE, WE TALKED ABOUT EVERYTHING OF OUR LIVES. TO CONTINUE THE CELEBRATION OF MY BIRTHDAY IN DISNEYLAND WITH MY AUNTS, MY UNCLES, MY COUSINS, THERE WE WALKED AROUND THIS PLACE, AND WE HAD A LOT OF FUN. AT CHRISTMAS WE CONTINUE CELEBRATING MY BIRTHDAY, AND I LOOVED THE DINNER, MAILY FOR THE DELICIOUS FOOD, AT 12 O`CLOCK MY FAMILY GAVE ME FABULOUS GIFTS THAT I LIKED A LOT, AND FINALLY TO FINISHOUR TRIP AND THE CELEBRATION OF MY BIRTHDAY WE WENT TO LOS ANGELES TO VISIT SOME PLACES, AND I SHARED A LOT WITH ALL OF THE MEMBERS OF MY FAMILY. FOR THESE REASONS I LOVED TO CELEBRATE MY BIRTHDAY IN CALIFORNIA
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