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martes, 28 de octubre de 2008
My first rave party
I remember the occassion when I went to my first rave party, that was on October 2nd, 2003. The party was on the Picacho hill. My friend´s mom gave us a ride to the Calvillo´s road and we walked and climbed like an hour to arrive at the rave. When we arrived, we listened to psychedelic music, it inspired us to drink alcohol. We bought three bottles of vodka and a big bottle of juice. We drank and danced like "crazies" all night. Around 6 am I decided to go to sleep because I was totally drunk. That was an awesome adventure and I enjoyed it.
your paragraph describes very well your first time....I can imagine that.... drunk men.
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