martes, 2 de diciembre de 2008

Infidelity (argumentative)


According to specialists the main causes of Infidelity are monotony and routine. For example if a couple has been together for 4 years but all the time they make the same things they can get bored, men who have an other woman, said that in their girlsfriends did not find the love, stability, comprehension, and the se they needed.
Infidelity begins for these reasons. Statistics, say that men are more unfaithful than women, because men are more unfaithful for nature. I am sure that Infidelity is a bad action, and I am in con because people who suffer Infidelity in occasions, are more insecur when they want to have an other couple. Since they do not believe in the new person and think that they will suffer again.
Besides people who suffer Infidelity are sad, sometimes agressive when they meet other people. But men think that it is okay, because they do not find waht they needed. And other men that they deserve many women but it is no true.
For all these reasons Infidelity is an immoral fact.

2 comentarios:

CECILIA DIAZ dijo...

Is it a good paragraph, good topic, and I think that all the information is tru.
You have a structure clear in you paragraph, and strong and steady you supportaing detail, because is very clear the main idea Congratulations!!!!!

kAwAiI aErEo By InDy dijo...

Your paragraph is fine, and you gave good reasons and I think that infidelity is more of men, but there is women that... what do you think?